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there he stood like a stranger
amidst all the panic and the danger
he saw them all try to run
mother,father,daughter,son
he watched them all with grief in his eyes
as he could do nothing but watch them die
though to save them all he tried
he could not break the laws of space and time
"what is meant to happen must always be"
with a heavy heart and conscience said he
filled with regret as he told them he was sorry
countless planets, the whole universe he saved
from innumerable threats and villains depraved
rarely a thank you did he ever get
he never required one, on him you could always depend
the doctor was always there, the universe to mend
action and adventure he wanted to share
sights and wonders beyond compare
companionship was all he asked for
he never really wanted more
on through the ages he constantly travels
the only one to stop space and time before it unravels
he tries to make the best of everything
though at his death, his funeral dirge the planets themselves will sing
been watching Doctor Who lately, im a really big fan, finally got to see most of the specials this time the one called the waters of mars, its one hell of an interesting story, but its really starting to get to the point where you really see the kind of life the doctor must lead as a timelord, and its sure as hell not an easy one, i got inspired and i wrote this as the title said, for the doctor..
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YooraAe Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2016  Student Artist
Reading this while listening to Sleeping at last-Saturn... such a no-no, unless you feel like crying yourself to sleep xD Which, obviously, means you've done a great job, succeeding to stir feelings like that :) Keep them coming!
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SirenaRose034 Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
you are so kind to say that, i was crying when i wrote it, the waters of mars hit me hard and then the end of time, 
and then just when you think they cant hit you with the fangirl feels anymore or make you like anyone else they bring in matt smith and capaldi, lol curse that moffatt
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Kalda-chan Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2016
He tried to put up a front... but we know he's really hurting inside... That was beautiful! :sad: :sigh: 
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SirenaRose034 Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
i know, david is too great an actor, the pain on his face always gets me, 
also so so sorry for the long silence, i really appreciate your kind words
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Emeraldwillow9867 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Stunning. I love how its simple and complicated at the same time. As the Doctor would say, Brilliant! (Or fantastic, your choice)
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SirenaRose034 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much! i'm so sorry i didn't reply, college has kept me busy for ages and its gonna be crazy. I really appreciate your kind comment! thank you!
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Emeraldwillow9867 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, that's fine. Life can get pretty hectic, and better late than never. :)
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SirenaRose034 Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank god college is almost over, i hope
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ashe007 Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2011
Haha! Love it! <3
Check out mine!
Here it is: [link]
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ashe007 Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2011
Haha! Love it! <3
Check out mine!
Here it is: [link]
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SirenaRose034 Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks
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ashe007 Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2011
you're welcome :D
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Robyn-V-Mcbrayer-IV Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2011
i always ot that it wouldn't be easy... loosing so much... you wright the doctor very well
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SirenaRose034 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks so much, i rly did try to capture the essence of it, i still have this nagging feeling that i still dont entirely do it the justice that the doctor deserves
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Robyn-V-Mcbrayer-IV Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2011
ya but you still did a better job than a lot of people
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SirenaRose034 Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks so much thats awfully kind of you to say, <//_^> i always do my best especially for people like the doctor
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Robyn-V-Mcbrayer-IV Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2011
^_^
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TinaCaper Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2011  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Very good
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SirenaRose034 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks very much <//_^>
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Tevase Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
OMG the last episode with number 10 is so sad
but i love your poem its brilliant
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SirenaRose034 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
i know that last performance he gave just hit me so hard, he rly was brilliant, it made me cry like no movie ive ever seen. and again it just goes to show what a wonderful and brilliant person he is, and even if he is an alien, he shows more compassion and humanity than just about any human person on this planet, myself included some days.
hes just so amazing but i always have trouble with my parents, they cant understand why on earth im such a big fan of it, urrrrg lolz
and thanks so much, i tried to make it really nice, tho im still a bit afraid that i mightve couldve done something differently
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Tevase Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
The poem is perfect how it is
My grandparents say that david is a horrible actor but i think he is amazing, i watch the episodes over and over again
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SirenaRose034 Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
many many thanks, ur too kind, <//_^>
and they said that? they sound like some of the old school fans, the ones that love the older episodes best. i know a few like that,
actually i hated matt smith for a long time for much the same reason but then i watched the full season he rly grows into it after the first 3 episodes and i must say for all his ego he does pretty well so hes won me over
maybe they just need to watch all the episodes in tennants seasons
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Tevase Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Yeah i didn't really like matt smith but i suppose he isnt the worse doctor that been around =D
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SirenaRose034 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
actually he gets rly good towards the end of his first season he just started out horrid
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Tevase Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
I know
i started to watch it
and its not that bad now he's gotin into it a bit
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SirenaRose034 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
i know seriously its crazy
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dragonfan101 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow... That is The Doctor.
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SirenaRose034 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
yeah waters of mars and the end of time were very inspirational to me, i couldnt help but want to write something for him
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dragonfan101 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Still haven't seen those yet. Unfortunately it'll prolly have to wait 'til I get back to the states 'cause I haven't a clue where to rent those here.
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SirenaRose034 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
wait ur not in the US? >.> whered yu go?
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dragonfan101 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm currently in Cornwall, England. Small little village on the coast. Brilliant place, reminds me a bit of Dr. Who. Not to far from Wales actually.
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SirenaRose034 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
omg seriously? ive heard of that place! you lucky dog! urrr lolz you keep making me jealous!
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dragonfan101 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
You've heard of what place?

Yeah, sorry 'bout that bit.
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SirenaRose034 Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
cornwall england duh! id love to get to visit anywhere in britain
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Godsprincess23 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
also reminds me Charsile from twlight
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SirenaRose034 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
ya thanks but i think the doctor is way diffrent close but diffrent
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